My room is a clean and comfortable for living. Every morning, i always cleaned before go to campus. the refore my room always becomes the most favorite room for my friend. they are very fond of being in my room because the atmosphare which so comfortable. i know it is a very small room, but it is the best place i have ever seen.
Selasa, 29 September 2015
My room
I live in small room. It is a room with size about 2,5 m2 with cream covered all the walls. In my room there are about a bed, a chest. in front of chest, there is bed. above the bed, there is towel hanger. at the corner of my room, there are cutlery. right next to cutlery, there are a computer and stick. above the PC, there is a box and on the box there is my equipment of campus. indeed it is a small room, but i like living in here for wasting my spare time.
My room is a clean and comfortable for living. Every morning, i always cleaned before go to campus. the refore my room always becomes the most favorite room for my friend. they are very fond of being in my room because the atmosphare which so comfortable. i know it is a very small room, but it is the best place i have ever seen.
My room is a clean and comfortable for living. Every morning, i always cleaned before go to campus. the refore my room always becomes the most favorite room for my friend. they are very fond of being in my room because the atmosphare which so comfortable. i know it is a very small room, but it is the best place i have ever seen.
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I suggest not telling not a small room or a small room, but that house where there is room in the house and the room is rented. for more detail you can tell that the atmosphere of the house contracted, for more detail
BalasHapusI get feel your small room and you enjoy the small room
Thank You
if you have feedback or respond my comment please confirm to me ,Mr Agus
thanks for the suggestion, I will try to fix the errors and shortcomings on my posts
HapusNo topic sentences and concluded in your paragraph .
BalasHapusI think the topic and paragraphs I've pretty standard, because my topic of my room so that I explain about everything about my room and the other what I often do in the room. I think you are less know and understand the intent of the paragraph that I created. Thank you for the advice
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